Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Tender Breath Sparks

Written: November 22, 2025, for contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Eyes lock in molten stillness,
where time dissolves its reliance.
Tongues trace tales on tender skin;
the dance is where secrets softly begin.
Love burns—a flame of whispered tones,
ignited by breath and crowned with unknowns.

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Paige Hind November 25, 2025 at 7:10 PM This is breathtaking- "where time dissolves its reliance."

sara Etgen-Baker November 22, 2025 at 5:30 PM captivating, dear Sotto....loved 'molten stillness'---what an accurate image that is. Best wishes with this contest entry.