Tenacious Twilight

This poem was written by me and my boyfriend Joshua
S-stands for what I wrote and J-stands for what he wrote.


S-They danced one night
to the music,
holding each other so close.
J-In his mind he knows
he loves her,
but he's trying hard not to boast.
S-He can't hide his feelings
whenever he looks
into her eyes.
J-He'd rather be with her,
than be with all the guys.
S-Her Blue-Green eyes
take his breath away,
but little does she know,
J-the feelings inside him 
are growing,
it's hard to keep control.
S-He really wants to tell her
the secrets he keeps within,
J-but he has so much to tell,
he doesn't know
where to begin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Moon Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 9:06 AM
awww, that is so cute how you and your bf are able to write a poem together...at first i thought it was about Twilight, the movie, but its not...anyhow i'm glad i got to read this piece, and am NOT disappointed...great you and your bf on a great write...keep the pen flowing...God Bless...~Brittany~
Sings Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 10:53 AM
SOOOO cuteeeeeeeee! love it
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Serenity. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Mcglone Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 1:27 PM
this is awesome!!! idk how u do it lol, im no where near good lol you have awesome poetry serenity!!!!
Loveless Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:39 AM
I love this, i really really do <3 cant say how much i do. .:rain:.
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