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Tenacious Twilight

This poem was written by me and my boyfriend Joshua S-stands for what I wrote and J-stands for what he wrote. S-They danced one night to the music, holding each other so close. J-In his mind he knows he loves her, but he's trying hard not to boast. S-He can't hide his feelings whenever he looks into her eyes. J-He'd rather be with her, than be with all the guys. S-Her Blue-Green eyes take his breath away, but little does she know, J-the feelings inside him are growing, it's hard to keep control. S-He really wants to tell her the secrets he keeps within, J-but he has so much to tell, he doesn't know where to begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/6/2010 9:06:00 AM
awww, that is so cute how you and your bf are able to write a poem together...at first i thought it was about Twilight, the movie, but its not...anyhow i'm glad i got to read this piece, and am NOT disappointed...great you and your bf on a great write...keep the pen flowing...God Bless...~Brittany~
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:53:00 AM
SOOOO cuteeeeeeeee! love it
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:59:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Serenity. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2010 1:27:00 PM
this is awesome!!! idk how u do it lol, im no where near good lol you have awesome poetry serenity!!!!
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Date: 3/29/2010 10:39:00 AM
I love this, i really really do <3 cant say how much i do. .:rain:.
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