Ten Villanelles- Fourth

4

We started close but have grown a stray
You're facing something extremely sad
We're moving apart, but I'm not far away

You are in my thoughts every single day
For not knowing your situation I feel bad
We started close but have grown a stray

To reconcile our indifference I seek a way
This is the first step I take on pen and pad
We're moving apart, but I'm never far away

In depression and sorrow I continue to lay
Abandoning the former rapport we once had
We started close but have grown a stray

The communication we have is often gray
I truly hope my words don't make you mad
We're moving apart, but I'm never far away

I am getting focused now and won't delay
To know you better would make me glad
We started close but have grown a stray
We're moving apart, but I'm not far away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 12, 2013 at 4:31 AM
This a sad, but sweet one. Sometimes one needs space. But not too much space. Another powerful verse from your haunting set. I appreciate your posts and I hope they give your strength. Keep it up! Always, Laura
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