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Ten Seconds

I'm down on the ground, My brain starts to pound, It may not be fun, But ten seconds aren't done. 10 seconds remain. I still have time, To arise again, The timer hasnt hit ten, Time isn't my friend, 8 seconds remain. I punch hard, I kick, I choke, I feel sick. I try to yell, over the incessant chants, This is the last time, my last chance. Five seconds remain. I call out, my plight. I never wanted this fight. I press up with all my might, I feel progress, my eyes are losing their light. Three seconds remain. It all hurts, to breathe, Under my worst foe, I am beneath. For it is no human, it's within me. I need to get up, to be free. But it isn't over, I can win, I push against that evil twin, The sadness loses hold, I can get up. One second remains.

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Date: 1/24/2025 9:45:00 PM
well sine on your fearured poem
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Date: 1/24/2025 6:19:00 PM
Vigil, well done. I felt it.
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Date: 12/21/2024 4:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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