Tempting

Diet buster pie
Slick banana creme supreme
Waist line, history












Composed: Spring 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcgee Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Oh, yes, I'm there with you. Congrats on your win!
Sambourne Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Hi Jeanne Thanks for your message. Pie is a great diet crusher. More power to it. Best wishes Brian
Walker Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Brian, an amusing haiku. ~ Sonia
Sambourne Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 10:32 PM
Hi Sonia Thank you for the feedback. I hope the 3 Lines brought you a Mona Lisa smile. Best wishes. Brian
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