Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Lyric

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- Tempted To Madness -

My impulsivity gives me a lesson
For a long time the words in me have been quiet
they embrace me on all sides, I do not hear
While the ghosts dance gracefully in the shadows

// I'm not without sin
  _ feel my cold skin
Oh, the fear breaks in //

A tone in the devil's treacherous symphony
So beautiful that I dared to open up to him
His split tongue and poisonous liar
This shady evening, that led me into the depths

// I'm not without sin
  _ feel my cold skin
Oh, so deep within //

I do not think the water can be turned into wine
It's simplest, is often the most sensible
I pray that the fall height will not be so painful
Forgive me, I have lived in sin and without meaning

// I'm not without sin
  _ feel my cold skin
Oh, where have you been //

Daylight comes, the blood pulsates in the veins
In frustration and ruthless pain
I have to deal with my previous choices
and hope that miracles seek my salvation

// I'm not without sin
 _ feel my warm skin
Oh, what a beautiful day //






01/09/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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- Lyric 2 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
2nd place in the contest

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John Watt September 24, 2020 at 5:45 PM Nice win with these dazzling lyrics, Sunny! Congrats on your win today. Hugs ~ John Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 2:08 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera September 24, 2020 at 3:27 PM Congratulations on your great win in this contest, Anne-Lise!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 2:07 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh September 24, 2020 at 2:39 PM A mesmerizing write, Anne-Lise:-) Splendid imagery! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 2:06 AM - Many thanks for my place on your contest list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Castellenas September 17, 2020 at 10:35 AM This is poetry dear Poet. I liked the energy and how you made the words come alive to the reader. Outstanding poetry. The reader understood every word. Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 1:54 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock September 5, 2020 at 7:43 PM Great lyrics and well written. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:07 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One September 2, 2020 at 1:40 PM Mad lyrics my friend! Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:07 AM - Many thanks S.O., for visiting and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball September 2, 2020 at 11:02 AM This is excellent Anne-Lise.\ Love it. So much emotion and the picture s perfect. Well Done.\ God Bless, JB Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:06 AM - Thank you very much for your comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux September 2, 2020 at 7:21 AM A very cool picture to accompany this piece. Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 11:20 AM ... cool :)

Richard Lamoureux September 2, 2020 at 7:20 AM Exceptional. My vote for POTD! Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 11:20 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit September 2, 2020 at 5:08 AM Lovely lyrics, Anne-Lise..awesome line; ..I do not think the water can be turned into wine ..It's simplest, is often the most sensible. All the best Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 5:16 AM - Vijat, many thanks for your words ... appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera September 2, 2020 at 4:38 AM A great lyric, Anne-Lise!! Smooth; pleasing music!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 5:15 AM - Many thanks Newton, for visiting and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman September 1, 2020 at 8:56 PM Classic poetry, beautifully written. Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 2:22 AM - Thank you very much for your valuable comments, Harry :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael September 1, 2020 at 4:10 PM A wonderful write...structure and message too...Well done Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 2:21 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire September 1, 2020 at 3:01 PM Your contrition is expressed so clearly and poignantly, Sunshine. I'm sure you have been forgiven. None of us is without sin. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 2:21 AM - No no one is without sin ... many thanks for your words ... appreciate your comments, Caolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan September 1, 2020 at 2:26 PM Wonderful lines, Anne-Lise, and the perfect picture to accompany them. Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 2:19 AM - Glad you liked it Jenna, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham September 1, 2020 at 1:29 PM An amazing write Anne, I wish you good luck in the contest. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 2:17 AM - Tom, thank you very much for your valuable comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May September 1, 2020 at 1:00 PM WOW Sis!!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 2:16 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your WOW comments, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)