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Temptation

Temptation temptation ,temptation You went down to the station I was waiting there All naked and bare Temptation, temptation, temptation,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/31/2014 6:29:00 PM
Golly gee Bonnie... Tempation as you wrote could draw a large audience. Enjoyed your limmerick Bonnie. Lindsay
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Date: 12/20/2014 4:53:00 AM
i could make a joke about a train and tunnel - err maybe not - clever write:-) hugs jan xxx
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Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 12/20/2014 5:13:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. This was just a fun write to open my mind for the day. I was missing my boyfriend at the time. As he had gone away. I was just hoping he'd return

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