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Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

Temptation

Temptation temptation ,temptation
You went down  to the station
I was waiting  there
All naked and bare
Temptation,  temptation,  temptation,

Copyright © Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts | Year Posted 2014

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December 31, 2014 at 6:29 PM

Golly gee Bonnie... Tempation as you wrote could draw a large audience. Enjoyed your limmerick Bonnie. Lindsay

December 20, 2014 at 4:53 AM

i could make a joke about a train and tunnel - err maybe not - clever write:-) hugs jan xxx

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

December 20, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Thanks for your comment. This was just a fun write to open my mind for the day. I was missing my boyfriend at the time. As he had gone away. I was just hoping he'd return

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