Gina Montalbo Poet Romanticism

Temptation

Temptation

Here I lay awaiting my faith.
Can I tempt you with my ever
lasting beauty that you can 
only see.
Can I tempt you with my soft 
full lips against your lips.
Let me tempt you with my 
breath blowing on the nape of 
your neck.
Are you tempted to let me run 
my finger tips across your skin 
to follow every curve.
Are you tempted to keep watching 
me lay here on the burning sand as 
the waves crash against my soft silky skin.
Are you willing to fall for the temptation of passion...

Written by Gina montalbo
04-11-2014

Note: I did on a request of another writer

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Twanna Irisha January 23, 2015 at 2:01 PM Very nice.

Vera Prince May 1, 2014 at 7:17 PM Very nice Gina Gina Montalbo May 3, 2014 at 11:45 AM Thank you.... Gina

Ana Espinola Collins April 29, 2014 at 6:54 PM Great write Gina :) Ana Gina Montalbo April 30, 2014 at 11:27 AM Thank you for stoping by and for your kind words

Robin Davis April 27, 2014 at 12:25 PM Gina Such a passionate, sexy and loving write. Full of seduction and feeling. thank you for the nice comment on my Black Hole poem. Gina Montalbo April 28, 2014 at 12:40 AM No thank you... And your welcome... Gina

Jan Allison April 23, 2014 at 5:06 PM What a beautiful sultry write. Hugs Jan Gina Montalbo April 23, 2014 at 9:13 PM Thank you for your comment .... Smiles and hugs..... Gina

Keith O.J. Hunt April 22, 2014 at 2:29 PM Great write Gina.... hot.... love it! Gina Montalbo April 22, 2014 at 5:16 PM thank you Keith... I try....

Paul Callus April 20, 2014 at 9:40 AM Hi Gina! Do you need to ask? :) Tempt as much as you like.....but pls do not just tease :):) Immensely enjoyed :) // paul Gina Montalbo April 22, 2014 at 11:53 AM Thank you for your kind words... Smiles and hugs.... Gina

Jeremy Street April 12, 2014 at 9:09 PM Just A Note: Reading Your Reply Below, Dear Gina...Surely We Can Understand Such As These Things But, Follow Your Heart Keep Brushing And, Thank You, For Your Kind Visit....Love, Jeremy Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 10:25 PM No thank you for your visit.... Gina

Arthur Vaso April 12, 2014 at 6:55 PM Very very tempting indeed!!! What a sexy beautiful poem!! Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 8:31 PM Wow thank you.... Gina

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2014 at 5:59 PM Very sexy piece. line 5 add a t to temp. Did you make this the shape of a bell on purpose? If so I hope he was able to ring your bell. There is a playful quality in your writing. Well done. Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 8:30 PM Thank you very much .... Gina

V P Mahur April 12, 2014 at 4:06 PM Dear Gina, Nicely written and portrayed. VP Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 4:24 PM Thank you for your insight... Gina

Lucilla Carrillo April 12, 2014 at 3:29 PM What a poem about temptation. It reminds me of the Mona Lisa that smiled just to tempt a Lover.. Good work keep it up... Lucilla Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 3:35 PM wow! thank you..... Gina

Larry Berdoo April 12, 2014 at 2:53 PM Gina,very creative and innocent. Thank you for sharring. Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 3:37 PM thank you for your insight innocence is in the hands that see all..... Gina

Jeremy Street April 12, 2014 at 12:28 PM Hey Gina, What's Up Girl ? Dig Your Beauty's Poe Love, The Passion...Yes, Even If We Were As To Descend Unto Their Deepest Depths In Carnal; Chasing His Flickering Tongue Ever Taunting Time ? Tracing, Her Silky Spine Sweet Sublime Poetic Crimes Podium Chimes....Still, We'd Fly As Rise To The Starry Skies *:*(* Love, Jeremy Gina Montalbo April 12, 2014 at 3:48 PM thank you it was a challenge for me to write outside my comfort zone....