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Temptation

Temptation

Here I lay awaiting my faith.
Can I tempt you with my ever
lasting beauty that you can 
only see.
Can I tempt you with my soft 
full lips against your lips.
Let me tempt you with my 
breath blowing on the nape of 
your neck.
Are you tempted to let me run 
my finger tips across your skin 
to follow every curve.
Are you tempted to keep watching 
me lay here on the burning sand as 
the waves crash against my soft silky skin.
Are you willing to fall for the temptation of passion...

Written by Gina montalbo
04-11-2014

Note: I did on a request of another writer

Copyright © Gina Montalbo | Year Posted 2014

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Twanna Irisha Date: 1/23/2015 2:01:00 PM Very nice. Login to Reply

Vera Prince Date: 5/1/2014 7:17:00 PM Very nice Gina Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 5/3/2014 11:45:00 AM Thank you.... Gina

Ana Espinola Collins Date: 4/29/2014 6:54:00 PM Great write Gina :) Ana Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/30/2014 11:27:00 AM Thank you for stoping by and for your kind words

Robin Davis Date: 4/27/2014 12:25:00 PM Gina Such a passionate, sexy and loving write. Full of seduction and feeling. thank you for the nice comment on my Black Hole poem. Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/28/2014 12:40:00 AM No thank you... And your welcome... Gina

Jan Allison Date: 4/23/2014 5:06:00 PM What a beautiful sultry write. Hugs Jan Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/23/2014 9:13:00 PM Thank you for your comment .... Smiles and hugs..... Gina

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 4/22/2014 2:29:00 PM Great write Gina.... hot.... love it! Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/22/2014 5:16:00 PM thank you Keith... I try....

Paul Callus Date: 4/20/2014 9:40:00 AM Hi Gina! Do you need to ask? :) Tempt as much as you like.....but pls do not just tease :):) Immensely enjoyed :) // paul Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/22/2014 11:53:00 AM Thank you for your kind words... Smiles and hugs.... Gina

Jeremy Street Date: 4/12/2014 9:09:00 PM Just A Note: Reading Your Reply Below, Dear Gina...Surely We Can Understand Such As These Things But, Follow Your Heart Keep Brushing And, Thank You, For Your Kind Visit....Love, Jeremy Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 10:25:00 PM No thank you for your visit.... Gina

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/12/2014 6:55:00 PM Very very tempting indeed!!! What a sexy beautiful poem!! Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 8:31:00 PM Wow thank you.... Gina

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/12/2014 5:59:00 PM Very sexy piece. line 5 add a t to temp. Did you make this the shape of a bell on purpose? If so I hope he was able to ring your bell. There is a playful quality in your writing. Well done. Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 8:30:00 PM Thank you very much .... Gina

V P Mahur Date: 4/12/2014 4:06:00 PM Dear Gina, Nicely written and portrayed. VP Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 4:24:00 PM Thank you for your insight... Gina

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 4/12/2014 3:29:00 PM What a poem about temptation. It reminds me of the Mona Lisa that smiled just to tempt a Lover.. Good work keep it up... Lucilla Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 3:35:00 PM wow! thank you..... Gina

Larry Berdoo Date: 4/12/2014 2:53:00 PM Gina,very creative and innocent. Thank you for sharring. Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 3:37:00 PM thank you for your insight innocence is in the hands that see all..... Gina

Jeremy Street Date: 4/12/2014 12:28:00 PM Hey Gina, What's Up Girl ? Dig Your Beauty's Poe Love, The Passion...Yes, Even If We Were As To Descend Unto Their Deepest Depths In Carnal; Chasing His Flickering Tongue Ever Taunting Time ? Tracing, Her Silky Spine Sweet Sublime Poetic Crimes Podium Chimes....Still, We'd Fly As Rise To The Starry Skies *:*(* Love, Jeremy Login to Reply Gina Montalbo Date: 4/12/2014 3:48:00 PM thank you it was a challenge for me to write outside my comfort zone....