Temporarially Witheld Title

A world with colours bright and true.
Greets wandering eyes' welcomed view.

Beyond the beauty there is need.
The atoms know light's secret deed.

Each color has a special task.
Reflected light unfolds its mask.

And souls intrigued by rainbows’ shine.
Shall once in heaven, know God's rhyme?

Awareness faltered by man's play.
Upon subconscious minds does prey. 

Discernments stored in distant pasts.
Awaken truths that have been cast.

Perception can great wisdoms find.
Reflected to us from God's mind.


This poem was written for the Colour and Perception portions of Brian Strand’s Intervals
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Wishing you the absolute best in the contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Lopez Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 8:27 AM
another well written poem. you have entered the contest with a great write.
Strand Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Thank you for supporting my experimental contest Dane.Rgds Brian
Sheart Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Wow! A beautiful couplet. Love your sentiments and the ryhme too. I can feel the colours of light, love, life and purpose. So meaningful. Good Luck in Brian's contest, a winner either way! Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia
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