Temple of Pain

i dwell in an empty temple of pain
All I see through barred windows 
Arrid lands
Dark clouds on the horizon making empty promises of rain
Being watched from afar
A hungry lion stalks the plains

Seen then gone
Playing hide and seek games
Beckoning me to escape
Calling me by my name
At night the moon sees it all
It waxes and wanes
There is no hope of being freed 
So forever I shall remain 
growing weaker each day
heavier grow these chains
Hope drains from my soul 
Like the blood from my veins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 1:15 PM
It's rhyme James. You have soup mail. Light & Love
Ashley-Garn Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 6:48 PM
this is great and shouts a very powerful meaning! i love it! great write! Ciara =)
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