Lily Twinkle Poet Sijo

Temple of Life

Water, gently filling a bamboo to the brim before snapping,
scared deer running in the right direction, to the hunter,
how many young ones are orphaned in this bloody hunting?

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Lily, Temple of Life, 5/2/2014
Syllables count:  16 - 14 - 14

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Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 7:59 PM WOW! Lily this is deep and powerful. I love it! Beautiful Sijo! Pandita

Deborah Shiells May 14, 2014 at 10:32 AM Hi Lily, This was powerful real and very very well written. Imaged and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing this write with use here. Thanks for visiting. Love and Peace, Deborah

Daver Austin May 6, 2014 at 11:28 AM Love the sound effect here, Lily.. Yes, how man perverts nature. :Love, daver Lily Twinkle May 8, 2014 at 6:53 AM Thank you daver for visiting and commenting.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 2, 2014 at 9:56 PM Nice take on the theme of the contest, Lily Lily Twinkle May 8, 2014 at 6:53 AM Thank you Dr Ram for visiting and commenting.