Temple of Life
Water, gently filling a bamboo to the brim before snapping,
scared deer running in the right direction, to the hunter,
how many young ones are orphaned in this bloody hunting?
Lily, Temple of Life, 5/2/2014
Syllables count: 16 - 14 - 14
Copyright © Lily Twinkle | Year Posted 2014
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