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Temple of Life

Water, gently filling a bamboo to the brim before snapping, scared deer running in the right direction, to the hunter, how many young ones are orphaned in this bloody hunting? ************** Lily, Temple of Life, 5/2/2014 Syllables count: 16 - 14 - 14

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 7:59:00 PM

WOW! Lily this is deep and powerful. I love it! Beautiful Sijo! Pandita

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/14/2014 10:32:00 AM

Hi Lily, This was powerful real and very very well written. Imaged and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing this write with use here. Thanks for visiting. Love and Peace, Deborah

Daver Austin

Date: 5/6/2014 11:28:00 AM

Love the sound effect here, Lily.. Yes, how man perverts nature. :Love, daver

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/8/2014 6:53:00 AM

Thank you daver for visiting and commenting.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2014 9:56:00 PM

Nice take on the theme of the contest, Lily

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/8/2014 6:53:00 AM

Thank you Dr Ram for visiting and commenting.