Temple

TEMPLE- Place where people go to worship God

Across the lane I see this Temple
People where walk without chappals

Full of marble looks so milky
And the touch that feels so silky

Flowers those bring different aroma 
Frees you out of mental trauma

Water in the lake is so clean
Little mermaids can be clearly seen

People go with heart,
full of devotion
Praying hard for there, 
Problems solution

When your loved ones leave you alone 
Ashes are passed in lake being mourn

This would be the last wish one requires 
May the conscience rests in GOD's PARADISE.


-------YASHU
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Chougule Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 11:00 PM
hey thnx julie.,.,.,,.
Heckman Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 11:01 AM
beautifully done Julie
Chougule Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 6:38 AM
thnx Dr. Ram and carol,,for ur comments,,,,,,,,
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Nice write on the sanctity of a temple, Yashwant
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Yashwant. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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