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Temple

TEMPLE- Place where people go to worship God Across the lane I see this Temple People where walk without chappals Full of marble looks so milky And the touch that feels so silky Flowers those bring different aroma Frees you out of mental trauma Water in the lake is so clean Little mermaids can be clearly seen People go with heart, full of devotion Praying hard for there, Problems solution When your loved ones leave you alone Ashes are passed in lake being mourn This would be the last wish one requires May the conscience rests in GOD's PARADISE. -------YASHU

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/1/2011 11:00:00 PM
hey thnx julie.,.,.,,.
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:01:00 AM
beautifully done Julie
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Date: 3/30/2011 6:38:00 AM
thnx Dr. Ram and carol,,for ur comments,,,,,,,,
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Date: 3/30/2011 6:09:00 AM
Nice write on the sanctity of a temple, Yashwant
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Date: 3/30/2011 5:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Yashwant. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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