Tempest

A wooden vessel, Buffeted by seething waves: Treacherous waters.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2012 10:17:00 PM

Raul,Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2011 11:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your magnificent Haiku poetry today Raul. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and please keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 10:39:00 PM

wonderful Haiku Raul depicting so much in few lines of great imagery..we are experiencing those treacherous waters from hurricane luv..hope u are safe.. good luck if for a contest...