Tempest

A wooden vessel,
Buffeted by seething waves:
Treacherous waters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 13, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Raul,Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD
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September 2, 2011 at 11:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your magnificent Haiku poetry today Raul. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and please keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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September 1, 2011 at 10:39 PM
wonderful Haiku Raul depicting so much in few lines of great imagery..we are experiencing those treacherous waters from hurricane luv..hope u are safe.. good luck if for a contest...
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