Tempest

lightning flash zigzags thunder rolls reverberate cloudburst drums rooftops
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 17, 2019 at 3:40 PM
tempest is the storm itself:)
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November 17, 2019 at 7:22 AM
I read your poem and thought tempest is hard rock.
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October 10, 2011 at 7:02 PM
we expect this scenario this week Carol.. transition from Summer heat to Fall cool.. lovely imagery ..those zigzags ..perfection luv..
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August 14, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Nice visual with apt images, Carol
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August 14, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Liked imagery your words create. Thanks for sharing. Steve
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August 14, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Very descriptive of those summer storms..Good work.Enjoyed..Sara
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