Telling Fairy Tales of She Who Wails

Telling fairy tales of she who wails
beside a lake in campfire’s glow this night,
it’s shadowy, for moon has hid its light.
My friend’s face pales; my sister bites her nails
as we lean in while listening with fright!

Our narrator melodramatically
relates the story of a woman who
had drowned herself because of misery.
And horrors! She had drowned her children too
inside this lake! Leaves rustle on our tree.
Wind now howls. My brother then shouts BOO!

theme: Telling fairy tales of she who wails
Jan. 30, 2020
rhyme scheme: abbab  cdcdcd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Messina Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 5:33 AM
LOL Thank goodness for brothers. Love it, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
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February 25, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Love it Andrea! Great write and win! Hugs
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 10:47 AM
oh geez, that ending - too funny. Great poem sweet lady, as always..be blessed Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)
Laurie Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Hello Andrea … over the years I have listened and told these stories around a campfire with a similar finish. Reminding me put a big smile on my face - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 10:26 PM
Great fairytale around the campfire! Just as you lean in believing...he yells boo! Great poetry tonight!
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January 30, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Loved this Andrea, that last lines a killer, could just picture the scene. Lol Tom
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