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Tell the Little Bird

much pain
incurred?

sounds like
a turd

be not
deterred

with time
heart’s cured

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Response to Caren Krutsinger’s A Little Bird Told Me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 9/19/2022 7:49:00 PM
I couldn't get past the fourth line. Some kind of 'brown-out' they told me: Had to call the electric company AND the plumber for this one. Quite a collaboration. ~ Bankrupt again
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Date: 9/19/2022 11:41:00 AM
Lol, I will have to read Karen's Poem. Constipation maybe? This Poem Jeff had me smiling.
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