Tell Me What You Think

Tell me what you think, When you look at me now
I've found myself, and you don't know how

Tell me what you think, When I'm not crying 
When you're not feeding me all these lines that I'm not buying

Tell me what you think when I look strong
You thought the hurt would last so long

Tell me what you think when I'm myself and you can't take that away
You thought that I'd be ridiculous enough to stay 

Tell me what you think, When I'm not scared 
When it dawned on me that I barely cared

Tell me what you think when you're forgotten and in the past
Because you never thought I'd move on so fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 6, 2014 at 4:01 PM
Wise decision...If the Love is not there you need to move on....love it
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