Tell Me the Mistake

You screamed aloud and you left
Was it really me to be blamed?
Lost in mind, lost in thought
Wandered everywhere to figure out

No more brighter day no more beautiful morning
That unbearable was I to be left hanging?
Well there’s no, nothing to be regret
You and I have immense memories that can’t be erased

Take me out of impenetrable riddle
Tell me the mistake that I didn’t commit?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 9, 2024 at 9:51 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 28, 2016 at 8:30 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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January 7, 2016 at 1:21 AM
:) SKAT
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September 4, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Malvis, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 4, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Malvis, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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