Tell Me

What is it that you most fear
What is it that brings you to tears
What makes your heart skip a beat
What takes you to peaceful sleep
Is there anything that makes your chest heave
Is there anything you choose not to believe
Tell me, to whom do you wish to say "I do"
Tell me every single thing about you
Tell me about your favorite color
Who is it you cherish above all others
Is there a thing from which you cannot part
What secret do you hold closest to your heart
Is there anything for which you would die
Could we be closer friends, you and I
Do you like it when we laugh and have fun
Do you treasure me for the long run
Tell me everything that comes into your mind
Let us whisper all night, you and I

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Date: 7/13/2013 7:34:00 PM
Great write April.....I say keep the questions going.........communication is the key to life long happiness. The final line 'Let us whisper all night, you and I' loved it..........Shaz
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Date: 6/24/2013 1:06:00 PM
Within the heart of a young girl. Poetic rhymes begin to unfurl. The depth of soul will emerge and shatter. If you don't ignore all of the chatter. So let the blues play with the muse. Or the other way around. The bottom line is congratulations for getting off the ground. :) Peace.
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:34:00 PM
Very good but I will have to get to know you better before I answer. *lol* sorry I could not resist. I enjoyed your poem very much. Welcome to the soup and I appreciate your visit.
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:22:00 PM
Hello April - I had to see who you were and read your writing. Wonderful poem! I also wanted say thank you for your kind words. So appreciated! Z
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Date: 6/23/2013 5:54:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Very passionate lines that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this evening..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:11:00 PM
Thank you SO much Sara! Thanks for reading and I hope you read more. :)
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