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Something quick for the Valentines Day Senryu contest.

Tell Her You Love Her

Tell her you love her.
Don't ever leave her in doubt!
That's what life's about.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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February 9, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Hi Mark, This is so true. In this it's good to "assume" the object of your affection knows. Tell them and show them. Well done. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
Halliday Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Check out Tell The Lady Often That You Love Her. I digs more deeply into the topic. Thanks for commenting.
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:52 PM
very nice message and nicely rhymed!
Halliday Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:21 PM
Thanks again
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:16 PM
A sweet senryu, congratulations on your winning placement!
Halliday Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Thanks. If you liked that, you should read Tell The Lady Often That You Love Her. More thought went into that one. Happy Valentines Day next week.
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Happy Valentine's Day, Mark. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
Halliday Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Thanks. If you liked that, you should read Tell The Lady Often That You Love Her. More thought went into that one. Happy Valentines Day next week.
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:49 PM
- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 5:04 PM
beautiful little rhyming message for valentine.
Halliday Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Thanks. If you liked that, you should read Tell The Lady Often That You Love Her. More thought went into that one. Happy Valentines Day next week.
Onclaud Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 4:01 PM
and i agree 100%, mark... very nice reminder!...huggs
Halliday Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Thanks. If you liked that, you should read Tell The Lady Often That You Love Her. More thought went into that one. Happy Valentines Day next week.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 12:17 PM
- So true and a beautiful idea for Valentine ... that's all we need :) - Best wishes in the contest, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Lovely, Mark. Much wisdom here.
Halliday Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Thanks. If you liked that, you should read Tell The Lady Often That You Love Her. More thought went into that one. Happy Valentines Day next week.
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