For Bitesize Contest No.143 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier
Sit down. Hear my strange story about my day at the observatory. I peered through a magic telescope filled with sad memories and hope. Through one side I could see the past. The other showed a future, gone too fast.
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