Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Telescope

View the planets and the stars
 See the beauty that is Mars,
 Look at the heavens in all its splendor
 Observe the galaxies it may render

 Distant stars in all their glory
 As the universe tells its story,
 Look at all of Saturn's rings,
 And the many moons Jupiter brings

 Distant galaxies all come into view
 You may catch a glimpse of Neptune too
 As you view the heavens from afar
 And catch the twinkles of a star
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Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2023 at 2:07 PM - Congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Terry Miller August 11, 2023 at 2:51 AM Very creative, and so well penned; congratulations.

Paula Goldsmith August 10, 2023 at 1:23 PM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I love the night sky. This week we had a full moon. So Pretty... Have a beautiful day.............

The Situation August 9, 2023 at 6:14 PM Exactly what I love to see!!! It mentions things that grab my intrest.

Akkina Downing August 9, 2023 at 10:20 AM I grew up on an island in the pacific, and although we own no telescopes, still the beauty at night staring up in the night sky is absolutely beautiful. Your gem here just reminds me of that. Beautiful poem, Joseph.

Susan Lawrence August 8, 2023 at 4:15 PM Love this Joseph ! I have always gazed at the stars in wonder trying to make out all of the realms beyond . I used to sleep out in a tent with my younger sisters in our backyard and tell star gazing stories . Of course we had popcorn too ! All the best, Susan :)

Sara Kendrick August 8, 2023 at 1:39 PM You make it seem so appealing. Thanks for sharing this very creative one. The night sky is very fascinating. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2023 at 1:14 PM - So much exciting to study through a telescope ... lovely poem, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit August 8, 2023 at 6:37 AM Heavens from afar indeed! They are so powerful now--amazing images!!

Brandy Nicole August 7, 2023 at 6:43 PM I'm fascinated with stars, the moon, and our universe. Its beauty is beyond breathtaking. Your words take me there. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

David Fisher August 7, 2023 at 4:36 PM This is great how you used telescope as a communication device.

Jan Allison August 7, 2023 at 11:07 AM I love looking at the heavens on a clear night, we have low levels of light pollution here so it can be quite spectacular just like your lovely lines Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx