Teenage Demon

All she wanted was to be cared for.
Now all she has is       and gore.
The friends she had.
They made her mad.
When she went to her mothers
Funeral
She found it usefull.
That some day she would be the same.
They were the ones to blame.
What a shame. . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Perkins Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 5:58 PM
let me guess, its sam
Perkins Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 5:12 PM
sure
Bruso Avatar
October 23, 2008 at 11:14 PM
Nicely done, Alexz! You show much inner-depth for one so young! Lonnie
Gray Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 5:03 PM
nope
Gray Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 4:52 PM
>.> i don't know yet
Gray Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 4:37 PM
damn >.>
Loving Iii Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 1:26 PM
i don't like the ideals but they are very well expressed. time heals all wounds. john
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