Teen Love

he gave me a smile 
out of the corner of his smacky lips
it made me feel
like he was for me to own
i felt he liked me
but did he?

last day i saw him
below the feeble moonlight
his eyes glittered
or was it just me?
he glanced at me-
a quick cold glance.
i felt my heart burst
does he hate me? 

lunch time at school
backpack weighing down
queing at counter
i almost fainted
no.it wasn`t the heat or the wait
but,HIM behind me
getting crammed against my backpack
i stood lost
trying not to look at him
but i saw him
looking at me
and it was no cold look
my heart jumped inside me
he really likes me

but i really dont know
i will just wait
and eventually find out
if he`d like to be my boyfriend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/8/2015 8:17:00 AM
- Lovely and sweet poem, Suze :) - I wish you a wonderful weekend, with many smiles and sunshine - hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:42:00 AM
thank u 4 ur kind words anne.is it ok i call u anne
Date: 4/14/2015 11:50:00 AM
More than just words and greatly significant lines for a wonderful day as this. I am happy to stop by. Great write and keep it up because I will still come knocking at the door of your wonderful pages.
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:44:00 PM
really ... thank u
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:42:00 PM
thank u so much 4 ur comment
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