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Teen Love

he gave me a smile out of the corner of his smacky lips it made me feel like he was for me to own i felt he liked me but did he? last day i saw him below the feeble moonlight his eyes glittered or was it just me? he glanced at me- a quick cold glance. i felt my heart burst does he hate me? lunch time at school backpack weighing down queing at counter i almost fainted no.it wasn`t the heat or the wait but,HIM behind me getting crammed against my backpack i stood lost trying not to look at him but i saw him looking at me and it was no cold look my heart jumped inside me he really likes me but i really dont know i will just wait and eventually find out if he`d like to be my boyfriend.

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Date: 5/8/2015 8:17:00 AM
- Lovely and sweet poem, Suze :) - I wish you a wonderful weekend, with many smiles and sunshine - hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:42:00 AM
thank u 4 ur kind words anne.is it ok i call u anne
Date: 4/14/2015 11:50:00 AM
More than just words and greatly significant lines for a wonderful day as this. I am happy to stop by. Great write and keep it up because I will still come knocking at the door of your wonderful pages.
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:44:00 PM
really ... thank u
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:42:00 PM
thank u so much 4 ur comment

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