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Teasing Waves

Gentle lapping waves tickle tiny toes, sharing bubbles of laughter 28/01/19 'ocean waves haiku contest' : sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/28/2019 6:01:00 PM
I could envision my first child with his toes in the water, giggling. Wonderful little Haiku Wendy!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/28/2019 11:43:00 PM
Thank you,Susan. t takes me back to such fun distant times too. Sadly, I just missed the contest deadline!
Date: 1/28/2019 7:42:00 AM
Love that last line...Very nicely done..Best wishes..
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/28/2019 11:44:00 PM
Thank you,Joseph. I had visions of the frothing retreating water having a sense of mutual fun!

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