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Teasing Waves

Gentle lapping waves
       tickle tiny toes, sharing
             bubbles of laughter


                       28/01/19


'ocean waves haiku contest' : sponsored by Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Wendy Watson | Year Posted 2019

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January 28, 2019 at 6:01 PM

I could envision my first child with his toes in the water, giggling. Wonderful little Haiku Wendy!

January 28, 2019 at 11:43 PM

Thank you,Susan. t takes me back to such fun distant times too. Sadly, I just missed the contest deadline!

January 28, 2019 at 7:42 AM

Love that last line...Very nicely done..Best wishes..

January 28, 2019 at 11:44 PM

Thank you,Joseph. I had visions of the frothing retreating water having a sense of mutual fun!

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