Wendy Watson Poet Haiku

Teasing Summer Breeze Haiku

summer breeze coaxes
    gentle waves of lapping seas -
          to tickle my toes



26/10/18


'haiku/senryu contest' October challenge : sponsored by Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2018 at 1:52 AM gosh, this is quite wonderful. I adore it! Wendy Watson October 28, 2018 at 12:06 PM It failed to tickle her fancy but I'm delighted it warmed your heart, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger October 27, 2018 at 6:53 AM Beautifully done,Wendy. Good luck in the contest. I can smell the ocean, and feel sand in my toes this morning. Wendy Watson October 28, 2018 at 12:07 PM I'm glad to be the bearer of a little warmth on this cold autumnal day! Thank you,Caren.

Line Gauthier October 26, 2018 at 4:15 PM Sweet, Wendy. Lovely imagery. Wendy Watson October 26, 2018 at 4:23 PM Thank you, Line. I needed a bit of warmth on this cold autumnal evening!

Tom Cunningham October 26, 2018 at 3:00 PM Lovely image Wendy, roll on next summer. Good luck. Tom. Wendy Watson October 26, 2018 at 3:16 PM Exactly, Tom! I've written quite enough on the autumnal theme already and am not yet ready to think about bobble hats and scarves!

Chris Green October 26, 2018 at 2:36 PM This was a beautiful scene you painted with your words Wendy. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. Wendy Watson October 26, 2018 at 3:14 PM How kind of you to take the time to comment, Chris! It's very cold in my neck of the wood on this late October evening so I needed some warming thoughts!