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Teasing Summer Breeze Haiku

summer breeze coaxes gentle waves of lapping seas - to tickle my toes 26/10/18 'haiku/senryu contest' October challenge : sponsored by Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2018 1:52:00 AM

gosh, this is quite wonderful. I adore it!

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/28/2018 12:06:00 PM

It failed to tickle her fancy but I'm delighted it warmed your heart, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/27/2018 6:53:00 AM

Beautifully done,Wendy. Good luck in the contest. I can smell the ocean, and feel sand in my toes this morning.

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/28/2018 12:07:00 PM

I'm glad to be the bearer of a little warmth on this cold autumnal day! Thank you,Caren.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/26/2018 4:15:00 PM

Sweet, Wendy. Lovely imagery.

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/26/2018 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Line. I needed a bit of warmth on this cold autumnal evening!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/26/2018 3:00:00 PM

Lovely image Wendy, roll on next summer. Good luck. Tom.

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/26/2018 3:16:00 PM

Exactly, Tom! I've written quite enough on the autumnal theme already and am not yet ready to think about bobble hats and scarves!

Chris Green

Date: 10/26/2018 2:36:00 PM

This was a beautiful scene you painted with your words Wendy. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/26/2018 3:14:00 PM

How kind of you to take the time to comment, Chris! It's very cold in my neck of the wood on this late October evening so I needed some warming thoughts!