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Tease Me My Dear So Nicely

Tease me my dear so nicely Gently and seductively Soft moonlight across the sea Grant me wings, a breeze, a kiss. Warm lasting, a touch of bliss. Sweet treacle lace upon me Gently and seductively. His beryl eyes tease, away Where a billion stars astray Mirthful summer windswept day In a waltz, a will to stay. Tease me my dear so nicely Tunes unfurl, indulge in the thrill, Whilst swaying body fulfill. Passion aflame my heart still Flutter weak into his will Gently and seductively. In the rhythmic riff till five, Of music that comes alive Breathless sensual derive My eyes reaching for the sky. Tease me my dear so nicely Gently and seductively 3/23/2020 A-Muse-Sing Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 1/29/2021 8:13:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Eve ~
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Date: 4/13/2020 9:20:00 AM
Hi Eve: A beautiful poem with so much rhymn! Congrats!
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Date: 4/12/2020 12:28:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/27/2020 3:04:00 AM
Very lovely and emotional piece. I enjoyed your poem Eve. Best wishes my friend.
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Date: 3/26/2020 9:18:00 AM
Marvelous mix of language and form in this sensual and evocative piece Eve. Your command of selecting the strongest vocabulary shines in this verse. Really impressive.
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Date: 3/25/2020 1:25:00 AM
Eve, this poem sings and dances across the page. It is very deserving of the First Placement in Brian's contest!Best for a top win in Richard's too. Congratulations! I loved this romantic beauty! xxoo
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Date: 3/25/2020 1:08:00 AM
The music metaphor expressing love. Your words painted a lovely picture. Congratulations on your winning placement Eve!
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Date: 3/24/2020 9:17:00 AM
beautiful seductive write Eve... a pleasure to read... best wishes in the contest :) hugs and blessings
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Date: 3/23/2020 9:11:00 PM
A sweetly delivered with just the right amount of smooth. Gl in the contest dear Eve.
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Date: 3/23/2020 5:48:00 PM
Eve, this is such a gentle, lyrical piece. A romantic gem that does paint its sensual visions in the mind. Emotion sings from each wonderful line. A beautiful fav. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/23/2020 10:12:00 AM
Beautifully romantic Eve. I really enjoyed it, Happy Monday xxoo
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Date: 3/23/2020 7:56:00 AM
Mrs.Romantic...a sensually fantastic piece here...
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Date: 3/23/2020 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful, "Mirthful summer windswept day In a waltz, a will to stay. ", Great lines
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Date: 3/23/2020 2:16:00 AM
You amused me!, and get to be the first to read your new poem! Good luck in the contest and all else - you stay healthy! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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