Tease Me My Dear So Nicely

Tease me my dear so nicely 
          Gently and seductively

Soft moonlight across the sea 
Grant me wings, a breeze, a kiss. 
Warm lasting, a touch of bliss. 
Sweet treacle lace upon me
     Gently and seductively. 

His beryl eyes tease, away 
Where a billion stars astray
Mirthful summer windswept day 
In a waltz, a will to stay. 
     Tease me my dear so nicely 
          
Tunes unfurl, indulge in the thrill, 
Whilst swaying body fulfill. 
Passion aflame my heart still 
Flutter weak into his will
     Gently and seductively.

In the rhythmic riff till five, 
Of music that comes alive 
Breathless sensual derive
My eyes reaching for the sky. 

     Tease me my dear so nicely 
          Gently and seductively

3/23/2020

A-Muse-Sing Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Eve ~
Sergi Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Hi Eve: A beautiful poem with so much rhymn! Congrats!
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 12:28 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Foli Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 3:04 AM
Very lovely and emotional piece. I enjoyed your poem Eve. Best wishes my friend.
Gaul Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Marvelous mix of language and form in this sensual and evocative piece Eve. Your command of selecting the strongest vocabulary shines in this verse. Really impressive.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Eve, this poem sings and dances across the page. It is very deserving of the First Placement in Brian's contest!Best for a top win in Richard's too. Congratulations! I loved this romantic beauty! xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 1:08 AM
The music metaphor expressing love. Your words painted a lovely picture. Congratulations on your winning placement Eve!
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 9:17 AM
beautiful seductive write Eve... a pleasure to read... best wishes in the contest :) hugs and blessings
Rose  Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:11 PM
A sweetly delivered with just the right amount of smooth. Gl in the contest dear Eve.
Raven Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Eve, this is such a gentle, lyrical piece. A romantic gem that does paint its sensual visions in the mind. Emotion sings from each wonderful line. A beautiful fav. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Gentile Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:12 AM
Beautifully romantic Eve. I really enjoyed it, Happy Monday xxoo
Michael Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Mrs.Romantic...a sensually fantastic piece here...
Kiser Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Beautiful, "Mirthful summer windswept day In a waltz, a will to stay. ", Great lines
Godwin Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 2:16 AM
You amused me!, and get to be the first to read your new poem! Good luck in the contest and all else - you stay healthy! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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