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Tears To Weep

When I lay me down to sleep, And cry the tears that sinners weep; To speak the words of a contrite prayer, And know that someone listens there. He cares for sheep that have gone astray, Who willfully wander their own way; They vex the pride that hides within, And drink the bitter cup of sin. The web of lies and dark deception, Lie in defeat of Light’s conception; To capture all and destroy life, With passion’s fire and human strife. We need to plant the gospel vine, Where evil rules and saints repine. While martyrs lead with ransomed prayer, With hope for life that tarries there. Blood that was shed on Calvary, Set slaves of transgression wholly free. So we rise from the grave to seek reward, Giving praise to a risen Lord.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2012 9:50:00 PM
A lovely poem of faith and conviction beautifully rendered... :)
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Date: 9/11/2011 10:06:00 AM
Another masterful piece! Bravo, bravo, the meter is perfect as is the subject. A most worthy poem Elizabeth. Try my poem "A Specter Speaks to War" Unfortunately, the poem was too long for the character restrictions and I had to submit it in two parts, I and II, which totally throws the meter off. So, when you've finished part I then just hold your breath and click on part two:)
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:44:00 AM
you must have some terrible sin in your life. i never cry about my sin. or never try to make those regretable ones that might attract an angels attention.
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Date: 8/31/2011 1:09:00 AM
Love it :-)
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:15:00 PM
We all do things we need forgiven. While we're just trying to make a livin'. A friday night, a saturday mourn. We had no choice when we were born. So Jesus is our only hope. It's with his love that we all cope. Without him we'd be lost forever. With him, our ties will never sever.
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:09:00 PM
The whole write beautifully adorned, I am touched deeply. Thanks for earlier comments on my poem. Thanks for sharing, bl
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Date: 8/27/2011 6:54:00 AM
Another beautifully written poem.
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Date: 8/26/2011 3:46:00 AM
This is the most beautiful poem you have ever written. I can tell it just came to you and drained out as if it were water. This could win any contest in my opinion. Once again you have made my heart smile.
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:51:00 PM
This is masterful. Your vocabulary feeds the rhyme and rythem. This could win the big contest. If they don't pick it, well so be it. Amen.
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:29:00 PM
i finished our piece. it's called "broken wings"
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:26:00 PM
it took all of my life but with His help i finally learned how to love Him with all my heart mind and soul. i could'nt do it but he did.
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful words indeed, Elizabeth
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:21:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “To Break The Chains & Crush These Walls When One Believes In Loves Sweet Call *^_^* Couldn't Have Said It Any Better My Dear Precious & Ow Sooo Priceless, Blessed & More Than Beautiful, Elizabeth! = No Sin, No Time, No Sorrow, No Grave *^_^* Loves Destiny, Composed & Written For All, Afore The Foundations of Life *^_^* Life, As We Have Thus Known It &, Yesss, That Means Your Beauty, Too! *^_^* Beautiful Painting Amid Spectacular Colours As Ever &, One for The Faithful Faves!” === My Love Unto You & All You Love, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/25/2011 4:00:00 PM
Another beautiful posting Elizabeth.I think you are gathering quite a few followers with your words of beauty that you post. :-)
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:29:00 PM
it has really been a pleasure reading your beautiful poetry, as this one was wonderful. will miss reading your stuff was really very creative, you do have a gift. thank you for commenting on farewell for now soupers.
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:16:00 PM
Elizabeth, while I may not be wholly (or is it "Holy") in compliance with the philosophical truth of this poem, I love your style none the less. And yes - you seem like someone I'd like to meet as well to discuss the deeper meaning of this some times wonderful and other times very difficult and confusing world we find ourselves living in. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. You're truly a kindred spirit and I hope we can stay closely connected. Terry
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:50:00 AM
A wonderful message of praise - thank you for such a wonderful thought this day
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:30:00 AM
I've come across several emotional and inspirational writes this fine morning and what a joy to come across this wonderful praise of yours! Be back soon to read more lovely poetry of yours!
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:22:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful poetry here Elizabeth.Love it.
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