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Tears Streaming Down

~ Tears streaming down ~ I reached out to a star pulled it into my hand It slipped through my fingers into Time's sands Where it twinkled at you from long years ago My tears streaming down the night you let go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/10/2019 5:34:00 PM
Reading this poem I feel for some reason a metaphysical sadness and miss what you here call "you". Whoever "you" was.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2019 5:48:00 PM
Yes, Comrade, Ponima-yu! ~ Mephistopheles brother, the confused philosopher. (Nyuk, nyuk)
Date: 10/10/2019 12:00:00 PM
So sadly romantic. poetry sighs :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, P.S. Thanks for letting me know how this poem impacted you. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/10/2019 5:24:00 AM
life a session of tears' river!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2019 2:29:00 PM
In your life, may rivulets be those of happiness! Thanks, Mahtab. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/9/2019 12:46:00 PM
A sad poem Gershon, you touched my soul! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer, for your touching comment. Appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/9/2019 4:59:00 AM
WoW! Gersh...excellent my friend... you're becoming a true poet after all lol...^WW^ :o)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:07:00 PM
Miracles happen, W.W. Even a jock like me occasionally gets lucky! LOL... Thank you so much for the lift you've given me. Cheers! ~ Gershon
Date: 10/8/2019 10:07:00 PM
This is beautiful and moving in so few words. God bless you always, Love and prayers for you, Gina
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:06:00 PM
Regina, you have given me such a boost with your lovely observation. Blessings, my friend. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/8/2019 9:38:00 PM
This is a brilliant write Gershon. I really love this. xoxoxo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment, Jeanne. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/8/2019 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:05:00 PM
One word, and you make my evening! Thank you, Kim! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/8/2019 5:03:00 PM
Oh wow Gershon this is simply beautiful!;) I came back just in time to read this beauty!;) and again I smile!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:05:00 PM
So happy to read your comment. Nothing beats happiness and smiles. Warmest wishes, Gershon

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