Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Tears Streaming Down

~ Tears streaming down ~

  
   I reached out to a star
      pulled it into my hand
   It slipped through my fingers
      into Time's sands

   Where it twinkled at you
      from long years ago
   My tears streaming down
      the night you let go

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Kurt Ravidas October 10, 2019 at 5:34 PM Reading this poem I feel for some reason a metaphysical sadness and miss what you here call "you". Whoever "you" was. Gershon Wolf October 10, 2019 at 5:48 PM Yes, Comrade, Ponima-yu! ~ Mephistopheles brother, the confused philosopher. (Nyuk, nyuk)

P.S. Awtry October 10, 2019 at 12:00 PM So sadly romantic. poetry sighs :) Gershon Wolf October 10, 2019 at 2:30 PM Thank you, P.S. Thanks for letting me know how this poem impacted you. Warm wishes, Gershon

Mahtab Bangalee October 10, 2019 at 5:24 AM life a session of tears' river!! Gershon Wolf October 10, 2019 at 2:29 PM In your life, may rivulets be those of happiness! Thanks, Mahtab. Best wishes, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos October 9, 2019 at 12:46 PM A sad poem Gershon, you touched my soul! Hugs, Jennifer. Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 9:08 PM Thank you, Jennifer, for your touching comment. Appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon

Winged Warrior October 9, 2019 at 4:59 AM WoW! Gersh...excellent my friend... you're becoming a true poet after all lol...^WW^ :o) Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 9:07 PM Miracles happen, W.W. Even a jock like me occasionally gets lucky! LOL... Thank you so much for the lift you've given me. Cheers! ~ Gershon

Regina Mcintosh October 8, 2019 at 10:07 PM This is beautiful and moving in so few words. God bless you always, Love and prayers for you, Gina Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 9:06 PM Regina, you have given me such a boost with your lovely observation. Blessings, my friend. Warm wishes, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee October 8, 2019 at 9:38 PM This is a brilliant write Gershon. I really love this. xoxoxo Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 9:05 PM Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment, Jeanne. Warm wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues October 8, 2019 at 5:05 PM Wonderful! Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 9:05 PM One word, and you make my evening! Thank you, Kim! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri October 8, 2019 at 5:03 PM Oh wow Gershon this is simply beautiful!;) I came back just in time to read this beauty!;) and again I smile!;) Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 9:05 PM So happy to read your comment. Nothing beats happiness and smiles. Warmest wishes, Gershon