Tears of the Willow Tree (Version # 2)

Hollow echo's beckoning, drawing near
whispering silent song's of the willow's tear 

Wilting wisp's of the willow tree
softly dancing in the breeze

Her swirling arms of fancy flight
draped in shades of shimmery light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 20, 2008 at 12:09 PM
Christine, it was so good to see your name pop lup in the who's online section. I've missed you. Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Creative personification too. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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November 10, 2008 at 5:48 PM
great verse
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November 10, 2008 at 6:59 AM
I love the Willow Tree, my favorite and in our front yard. Beautiful, visual write. Lovely. How ya doing my friend? Great to see you! Love, Shar
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November 10, 2008 at 6:28 AM
Lovely Christine, would like comments on The Wllow Weeps, if you would. Very best wishes Ann.
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