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'tears of Stone'

when his tears fell
on her generous bosom,
they became hard stone.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/25/2013 2:02:00 PM

Love the haiku,,,,, thank you for reading Fairy Tales,,haven't been on for a while because I'm sick. You have a great day and Easter .

Date: 2/13/2011 10:36:00 AM

The contrast in this poem makes for powerful reading. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2011 9:56:00 AM

A very tender and sad poem to think of.. and how tears can turn solid like stone .. enjoyed..p.d.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/7/2011 6:26:00 AM

Wow Honesty what a fantastic image, they became hard stone, love it.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 12/4/2010 1:01:00 PM

so very passionate and more in these words that you have woven together,,,and I do want to Thank you for your visits to my words and for leaving yours behind,,Blessings..Cecil

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/27/2010 11:25:00 AM

The depth in your Haiku is amazing, Honesty. This is profound! Thanks for reading me and the comments you left. Love, Audrey

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 8:37:00 PM

Oimbo, love the deepness of the change of emotions~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 11/23/2010 8:33:00 AM

crystalised tears cold as the stone - great imagery.... thanks for your welcome thoughts on my poem today, nice to meet you... kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.