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Tears of Rain

Freefalling From heaven above Father Cries

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/21/2014 2:33:00 AM

Tears of rain...beautiful.Thanks.

Sue Mason

Date: 9/19/2009 10:36:00 AM

Clever haiku here, James. Been quite a while since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you come back with more of your wonderful writing!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2009 4:52:00 PM

a clear shout for help..a powerful write Light & Love..You're missed.

Abe Lopez

Date: 8/27/2009 6:54:00 AM

A thought to ponder... hoping they are tears of joy!

Date: 7/23/2009 2:18:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen

Karla Null

Date: 7/22/2009 9:28:00 PM

What a beautiful sentiment, so little says so much.....Karla

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2009 3:30:00 PM

You know, it always seems like "rain" has accompanied the most tragic events in my life. Perhaps it is, indeed, our Father crying from above. Beautiful poem, James! Love, Carolyn