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tears of rain

Freefalling From heaven above Father Cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/21/2014 2:33:00 AM
Tears of rain...beautiful.Thanks.
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Date: 9/19/2009 10:36:00 AM
Clever haiku here, James. Been quite a while since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you come back with more of your wonderful writing!!
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Date: 9/15/2009 4:52:00 PM
a clear shout for help..a powerful write Light & Love..You're missed.
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Date: 8/27/2009 6:54:00 AM
A thought to ponder... hoping they are tears of joy!
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:18:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 7/22/2009 9:28:00 PM
What a beautiful sentiment, so little says so much.....Karla
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Date: 7/22/2009 3:30:00 PM
You know, it always seems like "rain" has accompanied the most tragic events in my life. Perhaps it is, indeed, our Father crying from above. Beautiful poem, James! Love, Carolyn
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