Tears of Rain

Freefalling
From heaven above
Father Cries
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Thajudeen Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:33 AM
Tears of rain...beautiful.Thanks.
Mason Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Clever haiku here, James. Been quite a while since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you come back with more of your wonderful writing!!
Guzzi Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 4:52 PM
a clear shout for help..a powerful write Light & Love..You're missed.
Lopez Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 6:54 AM
A thought to ponder... hoping they are tears of joy!
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July 23, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen
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July 22, 2009 at 9:28 PM
What a beautiful sentiment, so little says so much.....Karla
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July 22, 2009 at 3:30 PM
You know, it always seems like "rain" has accompanied the most tragic events in my life. Perhaps it is, indeed, our Father crying from above. Beautiful poem, James! Love, Carolyn
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