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Tears of Joy

It had been one of those magical days; Time to relax and unwind, Al fresco lunch by the lake in the park Banished all cares from my mind. Was it the warmth of the sun on your skin Which drew that radiant smile And brought a glow to your beautiful face Which I'd not seen in a while? You started singing as we walked along Fingers so gently entwined It seemed the perfect occasion to share Thoughts which were flooding my mind. There, as the nimbus clouds formed overhead I gazed into your brown eyes And as you whispered reciprocal love, Tears of joy flowed from the skies. 29/10/18 'Tell me a story poetry contest' :Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 12/24/2018 9:13:00 PM
What a lovely moment in time you created, Wendy. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 11/3/2018 8:04:00 PM
Sweet, Wendy. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 11/2/2018 5:30:00 PM
I love the metaphoric meshing of emotions and environment so brilliantly displayed in your beautiful poem Wendy. Well deserving of your First place win. Congratulations my friend! : )
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Date: 10/30/2018 5:25:00 PM
A story worth telling such as eating in the park and walking in love. This sounds like a winner to me!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/30/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on the poem,Ralph.
Date: 10/30/2018 1:20:00 AM
This is a gorgeous missive, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/30/2018 6:30:00 AM
Thank you once again for reading and commenting, Caren. Wasn't it an adorable picture prompt!
Date: 10/29/2018 12:29:00 PM
This was beautiful Wendy. It should do well in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/30/2018 6:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris. I've learnt from experience the wisdom of using the conditional mood when it comes to these contests!

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