Tears of Hope

Do parents trust?
Horror strikes heart
Can not bear shyness
Thoughts revolving... suicide?
Belong in VALEO?
Failure?... Quitter?
Pain!
Tears sweet release
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Intense write Joshua as tears flow freely at the end from all the penetrating issues above that last line luv.. good luck if for HG's contest luv..
Mehta Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Lovely and thoughtful write on tears of hope, Joshua
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