Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Tears of Blood-Collab

Relentlessly watching you leave
My heart starts pounding away
My eyes then begin to bleed
As my life slowly slips into decay

Blurry eyed I look to the ground
Tears leaving scars as they run down my face
A blackend heart is all thats left to be found
As our love is now gone without a trace

Now if you could only feel
The pain that rips at my heart
This love loss that is so unreal
Making me want to just tear you apart

Pondering the day I may see
Tears of blood flowing down from your eyes
Would bring such a pleasure to me
With a hope that those tears will never dry




11-17-11
Collaboration:
A special thanks to Cali Mitchell
For sharing her thoughts and mind with mine :o)

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Michael J. Falotico December 9, 2011 at 1:09 PM I can print this one out and put it in many mailboxes lol Such a good way to express your self my friend... Michael Dan Kearley December 9, 2011 at 1:58 PM I think it all came through with the help of Cali...She brought it out.Thanks for the compliment. :-)

Louis Rams November 24, 2011 at 10:34 AM SOME TIMES THE PAIN IS MORE THAN WE CAN STAND, AND THAT'S WHEN WE SEEK A LOVING HAND, SOMEONE WHO WILL CONSOLE THE HEART AND NOT LEAVE IT TORN APART Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:35 AM So true..Indeed.

Lizzie Treetop November 22, 2011 at 2:44 PM So many feeling with hearts ript apart...is pain as well as joy what feeds the pen to move and make poets of us all? Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:37 AM Yes! So much emotion behind the pen...

Dinda Minardi November 22, 2011 at 8:22 AM Very sad, I love the second stanza! Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:37 AM Thank you :o)

Elizabeth Wesley November 21, 2011 at 7:34 PM Vindictive guy you are! I understand that feeling of satisfaction you express so well. Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:38 AM Awwwe.Thanks :o)

Nathan D. November 20, 2011 at 10:30 AM wow really awesome ending i am happy to see people add twisted endings to thier poetry Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:39 AM Thank you very much!

John Castro November 18, 2011 at 10:08 AM YEP I FELT LIKE THAT TOO THEN I STARTED LOVING ONLY MYSELF LMAO =) Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:40 AM We all went thru that I think...

John Aaron Green November 18, 2011 at 5:49 AM wow,,i loved it,,wonderful to read words of love and emotion,,,my favorite...thanks for reading my poems,,and thanks for all your comments,,you guys have been so nice to me here at ps.... Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:41 AM Your works are great!

Elizabeth Wesley November 17, 2011 at 7:44 PM Great work by the two of you, powerful feelings being dealt with here. Dan Kearley November 21, 2011 at 11:01 AM I meen the powerful feelings. Dan Kearley November 17, 2011 at 8:25 PM I'd say.... :o)

Francine Roberts November 17, 2011 at 11:10 AM wow, well penned ( typo line 6, scares should be scars, scares is to be afraid, scars is to mar) I can't remember the last time I wrote anything intense, great job Dan Kearley November 17, 2011 at 11:59 AM Thank you so much for catching that for me. I do slip up... :-) Whats in my mind doesn't always type like it should.

Ashek Rahaman November 17, 2011 at 9:55 AM oh this is so good...keep on writing Dan Kearley November 17, 2011 at 9:58 AM Thank you very much! All comments very much apprereciated.