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Tears of Blood

I was there for you...Not through thick and thin. Not through blood and fire. But through pain and hurt, tears and sorrow. I was there. I helped you to heal. I protected you from everthing. I saved your day so many times. Don't act like you didn't see it. Don't act like it wasn't there. It was your choice to kill me, twice. It was your decision to break me. Why can't you just see that. There's no such thing as an apology when you don't feel even a little bit remorse for what you've done. In this world I am an outsider. And in this life, I can not live...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2012 12:39:00 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured:) and just have to add how amazing this was. from the title to the last line was simply breath taking and full of emotion. hope the rest of your writing days are filled with inspiration:)
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:24:00 AM
Jennie congratulations on your win. Every word you have expressed is so full of truth and courage.
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jennie. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:52:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner Jennie!! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/17/2012 7:03:00 AM
She meant your poem was featured this week.
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Jennie Duck
Date: 1/16/2012 3:35:00 PM
What do you mean this week's winner?!
Date: 11/25/2011 10:13:00 AM
Thankkkss soo much my fellow intelligent poets! But @ Dan Kearley...I'm sorry. I never truly make my poems and their titles relevant to each other...I just write my poems n in the box for title I type whatever pops up in my head and makes the most amount of sense.
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:07:00 AM
Very heartfelt narrative. I enjoyed.- JH
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Date: 11/23/2011 5:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Jennie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2011 2:06:00 AM
Thoughtful narrative , Jennie
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Date: 11/22/2011 7:08:00 PM
I was wondering about your title? I found it odd because I wrote a poem a couple days ago and have the same title? ha ha
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