Tears of a Fallen Angel

I mourn the day I lost all hope on you,
as delicate as you are, it has been rough loving you,
no road can go farther than you have taken me,
yet it was too short of a ride,
how beautiful you looked in the morming, 
as the sun compliment those eyes,
the birds chirping away;
as if they were announcing your arrival,
day after day they announced,
untill one day you never came;
yet the sun still shines, 
and the birds still chirp,
confused because i can feel your pain,
but my heart doesn't hurt,
clearly it's your pain,
and deservingly my gain,
i lost part of myself because of your departure, 
yet realized who i truly was, 
as life can not be changed or given back,
i can not regret,
only mourn for the angel that you were,
you are no more, 
only a memory, lying in the depths of my mind,
thank you for allowing me to love,
your welcome for i allowed myself to forget.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 9:58 AM
sorry for the loss.
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December 2, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Esko; this is all to familiar; I enjoyed it so. Lay
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December 2, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme... hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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December 2, 2010 at 1:59 PM
Hello there and welcome to Poetry Soup, The emotion and longing in your writing truly touches me. I feel I can relate to this on so many levels. Keep your spirit high and continue please to share your wonderful gift with us. As Always, Shar
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December 2, 2010 at 10:33 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Esko. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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