Pandita Sietesantos Poet Quintain (English)

Tears In the Night

Tears in the Night

Flipping the pages, I silently cry,				
reeling from the pain of your “Dear Jane” note.					
Stifling soft sobs, I exhale a sad sigh,	
as my tears blot the hurtful words you wrote…		
but my bruised heart heals even while you gloat.


08-08-2017	

Contest:      English Quintain - Any theme
Sponsor:     Sara Kendrick
Placement:  7th

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian March 23, 2018 at 3:02 PM Superb ..."hurtful words wrote, bruise heart heals while you gloat!!!"WOW! To think after writing so deeply you enjoyed my simplicity. You are wonderful writer and amaze me. bbn Pandita Sietesantos March 23, 2018 at 5:41 PM You are so sweet to leave your wonderful compliments that I truly appreciate! Thank you, Barbara! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier February 10, 2018 at 11:15 AM NEXT ! Bravo, Pandita. Well said. Pandita Sietesantos February 10, 2018 at 11:29 AM It's a pleasure to receive your sweet compliments and comments, Line! Hugs. Pandita

FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 1:24 PM Pandita such a sad yet strengthening piece. Beautiful! Pandita Sietesantos December 20, 2017 at 2:30 PM Oh thank you so very much my friend for stopping by and leaving your encouraging compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley October 15, 2017 at 8:55 PM Pandita, such beautifully sad sentiments of a broken heart but your last line signals a resilient spirit... Wonderful and lovely lines of imagery throughout. Your third and fourth lines, especially, are stunning. Your last line though, is absolutely gorgeous! Enjoyed your fabulous write my friend. Hugs and love to you always! Pandita Sietesantos October 16, 2017 at 1:10 PM My dear Susan, as usual it's so nice to hear from you and I thank you for your superlative compliments which brought a smile to my face! Thank you - thank you and hope you are enjoying a beautiful day, my friend. With love and hugs. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr. August 28, 2017 at 6:07 PM I feel the ever presents of the evil billy goat; So when I tied him to the barn; the IRS came and took the farm: What??! Just being silly. Great job I like it. James :O Pandita Sietesantos August 30, 2017 at 7:31 PM James, I appreciate your wonderful sense of humor which put a smile on my face:-)! Thank you so much! Best regards. Pandita

Silent One August 22, 2017 at 7:55 AM How is my friend? Been such a long time... Silent tears fall in all of our eyes, wounds always heal, unless we do not let them.. in a few words, you wrote the meaning of sadness... Pandita Sietesantos August 22, 2017 at 1:11 PM My dear friend, it is truly great to hear from you. I am doing a lot better now. Thank you for your kind words of praise and your meaningful comments which I so very much appreciate. I do hope that you are doing well in all respects. Love and hugs. Pandita

John Michaels August 18, 2017 at 11:18 AM Such a sad poem, Pandita; its brevity conveys a depth of emotion that belies its length. These days, I guess a note is better than a text... (at least you can tear it into little pieces or burn it - or both!!). Best wishes, John. Pandita Sietesantos August 18, 2017 at 12:27 PM Hi John, thank you so much for stopping by with your kind complimentary words. I definitely agree with you that a note is better than a text in this case. In the past, before burning it, I actually held on to such a note for a while to remind myself that at the end of the day, I was better off without that individual in my life! Hugs and kindest regards. Pandita

Ralph Sergi August 17, 2017 at 12:53 PM Hi Pandita: A simple but emotional poem. Thanks also for phrasing a "dear Jane ". All you mostly hear is the Dear John: letters speaking as a guy with 3 daughters. Pandita Sietesantos August 17, 2017 at 1:57 PM Awww - it's such a pleasure to receive your sweet compliments and comments! Thank you dear Ralph! Hugs. Pandita

John Fleming August 15, 2017 at 11:27 AM Love this, Pandita! That great opening line pulls you right in - Excellent writing! Hope you are content and secure...and everything is right for you with the world at this moment. My very warmest regards, Pandita! :) john Pandita Sietesantos August 17, 2017 at 1:01 AM Dear John, it's so nice to hear from you and I thank you for your lovely compliments which brightened up an otherwise dreary day! I am well and thank you also for your kind thoughts. Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Sara Kendrick August 14, 2017 at 5:19 PM I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Fast healing is a good thing especially if jilted by a fickled person..Congrats on your placement..Sara Pandita Sietesantos August 14, 2017 at 7:20 PM My dear Sara, thank you so much for honoring this piece with such a fine win! I enjoyed participating in your contest! Have a wonderful week ahead! Hugs. Pandita