Joseph Burchett Poet Rhyme

Tears In My Bottle

Tears fill my bottle,
What must I do,
My eyes pour them every time I think of you,
My life has turned blue,
I reach out but your no longer there,
Not even a look back,a wink or stare,
My love long lost and to far gone,
I cannot step forward to try to move on,
So Ill just set here with tears in my bottle,
I know my eyes will pour them forever now on,

                                            Written By Joseph Adam Burchett 1/19/12

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Kib G March 10, 2012 at 11:56 AM Very nice write Joseph.....I enjoyed reading it....N thanks for the luv u showed my writing too.... Keep the good reads flowin.....

Judy Ball January 20, 2012 at 9:49 AM There is great emotion here my friend. It reminds me of an old country/western song, "There's A Tear In My Beer 'Cause I'm Cryin' For You Dear". Not making fun, that really is the song. Many people take to the bottle when they have a broken heart but that isn't the answer. You have to move on because Life Does Go On with or without those you have loved. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse January 20, 2012 at 9:42 AM Enjoyed reading your work.....welcome to the soup. You are a cute young man good luck in your writing future!! God be your protector.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2012 at 2:24 PM Sad.....dont cry Joseph.... enjoy life while you have it. oxox hugs Anne-Lise