Pandita Sietesantos Poet Senryu

Tears In a Bottle

Tears in a Bottle


doors open, doors close
wasted opportunities –
tears in a bottle



07-22-2014

Contest:      One Solo Epic Senryu or Haikyu – In a Bottle
Sponsor:     Poet Destroyer A
Placement:  6th

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Liam Mcdaid October 1, 2014 at 4:46 PM treasures in a bottle beautifully painted piece bless you Pandita Sietesantos October 5, 2014 at 11:38 AM Many thanks, dear Liam, my friend, for your wonderful compliments and great support! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala August 29, 2014 at 8:08 PM Love this cool Senryu! Kika Pandita Sietesantos September 3, 2014 at 7:05 PM Thank you so much, dear Kika! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta August 21, 2014 at 5:24 AM Inventive one. congrats on the win Pandita Sietesantos August 21, 2014 at 7:30 AM Thank you kindly, Dr. Ram!

Robert Lindley August 20, 2014 at 10:22 PM Congrats on your win Pandita!! Pandita Sietesantos August 21, 2014 at 7:31 AM Thank you so very much, Richard!

Mark Trichet August 20, 2014 at 9:18 PM turn a -ve into +ve, sell the tears! Nicely done Pandita, loved it....congrats Pandita Sietesantos August 21, 2014 at 7:31 AM Mark, thank you so very much - glad you loved it!

Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 7:46 PM So sad Pandita...I really like it..hugs Tim Pandita Sietesantos August 21, 2014 at 7:32 AM Hi Tim, many thanks and I'm happy that you liked this one!

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2014 at 3:19 PM that is pretty cool. Tears in a bottle! Congrats for your win. Pandita Sietesantos August 21, 2014 at 7:33 AM Thank you so very much, Andrea - glad that you liked this one!

Poet Destroyer A August 20, 2014 at 10:38 AM anytime Pandita...LINDA

Paul Callus August 20, 2014 at 10:03 AM Stopping by again with congratulations, Pandita' well done. // paul Pandita Sietesantos August 20, 2014 at 10:08 AM Many thanks my friend for your great support! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A August 20, 2014 at 9:39 AM Pandita, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~ Pandita Sietesantos August 20, 2014 at 10:07 AM Thank you dear Linda for honoring me with a placement in your contest! Warmest regards. Pandita

Lucilla Carrillo August 4, 2014 at 10:40 PM Nice words written here and very true. When opportunities knock on your door - take them, they don't come often. Good write... Lucilla Pandita Sietesantos August 5, 2014 at 7:15 AM Thank you so very much, my sweet friend! Your comments and compliments always mean so much to me! Have a day full of sunshine! Pandita

Elmer Candol July 30, 2014 at 9:56 PM This a great experience. I like the line.. message: If there's a opportunity just grab it don't hesitate.. Pandita Sietesantos July 31, 2014 at 7:02 AM Thank you, my friend, Elmer for you wonderful comments, compliments, and encouragement! It means a lot to me! Kindest regards!

Peter Dome July 28, 2014 at 2:13 PM A sad but but one I only know too well. take care Pete. great write. Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 2:17 PM Thank you kindly, dear Pete, for stopping by and complimenting my work! I truly appreciate it! Warmest regards.

Gry Christensen July 28, 2014 at 12:16 PM Captured tears, captured tears of regret...........Very nice! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 1:58 PM Thank you, my friend for you wonderful comments, compliments, and encouragement! It means a lot to me! Kindest regards!

Dimitrios Karagkounis July 28, 2014 at 5:32 AM Nice! ..tears in a bottle.. I like it. Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 6:48 AM Many thanks, dear Dimitrios, for your kind compliments which I very much appreciate. Warmest regards. Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2014 at 10:28 AM meaningful Pandita.! God bless .. I am sorry for not replying to you long.. I have been so busy.. Hope all is well.. Pandita Sietesantos July 27, 2014 at 12:29 PM Hi Olive, thank you so very much for stopping by with your sweeet comments and kind compliments which I truly appreciate. Have a beautiful day, my friend!

Lyn Murray July 25, 2014 at 6:12 PM Simply beautiful! Pandita Sietesantos July 26, 2014 at 11:35 AM Dear Lyn, thank you kindly for your lovely compliment! Warmest regards!

Scott Thirtyseven July 25, 2014 at 8:46 AM Wow opportunities really swallows up the syllable count. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. Pandita Sietesantos July 25, 2014 at 2:12 PM Hi Scott, thanks for the kind comments and compliment which I truly appreciate. Warmest regards!

Barney Taylor July 24, 2014 at 12:10 PM I really like this. It is a single idea like an embryonic story with a thousand possible plots Pandita Sietesantos July 24, 2014 at 12:53 PM Hi Barney, thank you so very much for your kind comments and compliments which I truly appreciate. Have a great day!

Michael Ellis July 23, 2014 at 7:47 PM Beautifully expressed Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 8:46 PM Hi Michael, thank you kindly for your sweet compliments. Warmest regards to you!

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2014 at 6:57 PM VERY nicely done. I think PD will love it. Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 7:37 PM Dear Andrea, many thanks for your compliments and good wishes which I truly appreciate! Kindest regards to you, my friend!

Liam Mcdaid July 23, 2014 at 5:54 PM very beautifully painted piece Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 7:38 PM My dear Liam, thank you so kindly. Best wishes to you, my friend!

Jim Tidd July 23, 2014 at 12:47 PM Who said you couldn't write short poetry? :) Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 4:38 PM Well, I'm trying - hopefully I will improve as I go along and learn from more seasoned poets:-)

Debbie Guzzi July 23, 2014 at 8:14 AM Good one Hope you're having a good day! Light & Love Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 9:02 AM My dear Debbie, thank you so kindly. Best wishes to you, my friend!

Paul Callus July 22, 2014 at 2:33 PM This is another good senryu, Pandita. John's comment is also what crossed my mind while reading it. gl in the contest. // paul Pandita Sietesantos July 22, 2014 at 2:45 PM Thank you very much, Paul. I truly appreciate your support and encouragement! Have a great day!

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