Tears Hard As Shells

Her gaze traces an island
Scanning a plagued village;
Tears swell from a tidal fury
raking  bushes, shells--
In Maldives, she wails 
For lost daughters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Muideen Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Congratulation on your awesome win....7.................A.M.
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June 22, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Hi Ashley:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Ashley, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA
Callus Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Beautiful and yet sad. Worthy of a high placed win; congratulations, Ashley! // paul
Lawless Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 7:19 AM
congrats on the win
Hamilton Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 2:26 AM
nicely done Ashley congrats on win hugs
Roberts Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:52 PM
wow, just wonderful, congrats on your win
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 3:22 PM
so beautiful so sad this brought a lump to my throat! many congrats on your win Ashley:-) hugs jan xx
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