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Tears Dry Into Salt

Did the gods meet at the salt sea and have a severe tragedy?
Where tears flowed from giant eyes and shook the earth in pain.
 
The puddle of tears is the remains of such a great loss of majesty
Saltly crystals must have dried from god's cheeks like rain

Creation of the world could be simply described poetically
Forget all the scientific reason, let poetic logic gain

**For the Tears contest

Copyright © Doris Culverhouse | Year Posted 2010

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Julie Heckman Date: 1/2/2011 4:29:00 PM nice personification of god's "cheeks". I too say poetic logic rules the heart. Thanks for reading my poem. Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 12/26/2010 10:21:00 AM tears dry into salt.. forget all scientific reason which humans found and created. let poetic logic express the reasons of everything. amazing write, Doris. i think a favorite of mine. i hope your christmas was great. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

North Star Light Date: 12/14/2010 5:28:00 PM i really like this i really got a understand out of this one good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/14/2010 7:48:00 AM Good one..Very creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits...Glad you are feeling better..Sunflower Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/14/2010 6:11:00 AM Best of luck in the Tear contest.. with this excellent write... with luv Michael Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/14/2010 3:49:00 AM I like the last line of your poem, Doris where science fails, logic gains Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 12/13/2010 10:00:00 PM This is awesome poetry Doris. The images are clear and amazing. Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 12/13/2010 8:19:00 PM Hi, Thanks for your comment on my poem and may you dowel in the contest. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/13/2010 7:53:00 PM Doris, I really enjoyed your approach to the Tear contest.. All the best to you and thanks for your comments on my poems yesterday ;) Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 12/13/2010 7:47:00 PM Ps. Smile ~ I almost forgot, great title &, it is said that salt, is the flavour of the world so, keep writing & sprinkling "Your Beauties" seasonings of light; whatever sweet, sours, shades or colours they may be!? ~ "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Tomorrow My Dear &, 'Majestically Beautiful Poe;' A Fave" ~ "Sweet Dreams;" Bye!:) ~ Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 12/13/2010 7:43:00 PM Smile ~ First, "Thank You" for stopping by! Very nice to see "Your Beauty" again "Dear, 'Preciously Priceless Doris Culverhouse!!!'" ~ I love the soulful beauty I find amid this sweet & lovely piece; a wonderful painting &, I too believe that Spirits of Light & Life can through truth, bring sooo much more unto the world than science itself; poetry & the power of The Word....Hope "Your Treasures" are well &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John!:) ~ Login to Reply