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Tears and Tears of Hope

When tears dry up and laughter is not funny any longer As duvet feathers grind the weary soul to sunken skin The parchments dehydrated canvas folds the poet’s path A cliche strewn among the notion ‘it will make you stronger’ Depicts an empty victory pretends to gather strength and win The prelude of the past in future remains a lonely aftermath Gone are the days of jolly frolic of showers gelled and Turkish bath Of journeys tickling monumental Derwish’s allegoric spin Despairing anger cannot shed an inner war’s destructive monger With memories and wreaths of praise and laurel turned into wrath Then conjoined before and after numbness seems your next of kin A magic oriental carpet’s washed out fabric evaporates inside her An ancient pleasure cruise shrouded in silence’s muted fanfare Sails of plain cloth mystery weather worn in droplet’s silent fall Its time and place and time-place for scented oriental candles To rekindle a mosaic of epic proportions a glancing care from scare From feeling so minutely small and festered no recipe for standing tall Yet seeds of cinnamon and hope might just reset this hold of strangle Meditation reclusive pastures enlightenment from darkness’ bangle Retrieved from imposed prison shackles to praise to heal and call ‘I want to be the muezzin once more sing forcefully in ink and dare’ Climb my minaret resolve cacophony write messages to Self and strangle All those demons massage my dreams and foresight grab the haul Then conquer quietly as time proceeds ‘I know I can in solemn prayer’

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Date: 9/27/2018 10:33:00 AM
Hi Kai, Intense words and your poetic magic come together to produce a wonderful write. Kind regards, Jennifer
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/29/2018 3:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for that huge compliment. Sometimes I wish I could just write about beautiful flowers or so (and I will sometime), but I guess I am not there yet. Too much thinking maybe. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 3/29/2018 4:48:00 AM
Gone are the days of jolly frolic, when memories turn into wrath. Are you Samuel Coleridge’s reincarnate or who?
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/30/2018 2:21:00 AM
Thank you for that huge compliment. In my ignorance and maybe German being my origin and first language I really did not know about Coleridge. But now I have investigated a little bit. thank you for the trigger. Just keeping on writing. And by the way, your last name is not that common. Do you have a relative in Canada, who works with Balint Medicine? Many wishes, Kai
Date: 3/23/2018 8:48:00 PM
Oh I love this one a lot! So so goooood! Fave... hugs :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/24/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you so much. Kind wishes to you and happy writing, Kai
Date: 3/22/2018 8:00:00 PM
A very compelling profound write Kai…intriguing and interesting! May you always find hope in solemn prayer!~Che :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/23/2018 3:36:00 AM
Thank you Che. Prayer is good, in whatever way we pray. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 3/21/2018 8:20:00 AM
Your imagery perfectly set the poem's mood to deliver an almost palatable feel. Gray - I walk away gray and that is but a compliment on how well your poem worked its 'poem magic.' All the best ... CayCay
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/23/2018 3:37:00 AM
Thank you so much CayCay. Personally I must remember the grey when it is over. It helps to know, where I am coming from. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 3/20/2018 4:17:00 AM
- An awesome poem, Kai - Impressive writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/20/2018 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile. Sunshine and smiles always offer hope in drought and elate in good measure. And poets like you and I and so many others have to tell the message...
Date: 3/19/2018 2:50:00 PM
So eloquent, Kai. It's very poetic.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/20/2018 4:55:00 AM
Thank you for that comment from a FIVE STAR poet.
Date: 3/19/2018 6:56:00 AM
Excellent uplifting poem..
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/20/2018 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. I am glad that the positive outlook shines through.

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