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@@@ -U- tears silent roll down her face flow into >--------=----------her mouth---------=---------< she detects the salty flavor on the view of her other eye Its inherent leaking springs[ugh] wetness starts tumbling down right down her red cheeks things will improve as they usually do It lends her some solace her eyes are watering more heat leaves her body as her skin stiffens. her glazed eyes do not react to their fall laughed then cried warm salty tears burning up with emotion, red and unkempt guess nothing for a smile doesn't convey happiness she is the allergen that causes all her woes Her entire life's miseries struck once. So, ladies, hear me out on this. Stay strong even if hot salty tears stop. /\ / \ / \ @ @ / \ / \ / \ / \ >+++ +++<

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Date: 8/28/2023 4:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. A very clever design. I am sure it was not easy. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:03:00 PM
Lasaad, CONGRATS on your win with this very creative, descriptive piece! Janice
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Date: 8/27/2023 5:26:00 AM
Love this! Incredible. God bless you, Congrats and love, Gina
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Date: 8/24/2023 3:27:00 PM
I agree with Andrea. Its "interesting " Las. ( Glad you moved the turret of hair over her curls.) RIP lady with this legs. Best wishes SP
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Date: 8/24/2023 12:58:00 PM
these kinds of poems are so interesting . I thought this line was so brilliant: she is the allergen that causes all her woes
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Date: 8/24/2023 12:44:00 PM
You model is skinny legged and fighting the dreaded miseries of life my friend. But her poetry is superb! God bless..
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Date: 8/24/2023 11:57:00 AM
- It's not always easy to be strong when your emotions are out of balance - She needs some comfort and a hug, Las ... creative as always ( ... perhaps a bit thin legs :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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