Tears

Eyes so dry that
Want to cry and
Cannot; trigger
Those tears by 
Any means!
Why don’t they
Flow? 

Teas belong 
Where hope
Is gone!

lossi do not know?

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Connie Marcum Wong

June 29, 2010 at 1:55 PM

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Wilma Neels

June 25, 2010 at 11:16 AM

Interesting view David.. I tend to cry for no reason sometimes.. And then I feel better, crazy hey? hehe tc Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

June 25, 2010 at 8:57 AM

Even though I often shed tears, I HAVE to cling to hope. It's the only way to get through difficult times, David. Very compelling poem. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 25, 2010 at 5:44 AM

The flow of the tears do makes us light

Lynette Chachere

June 24, 2010 at 10:33 PM

great write. this is interesting about hope.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

June 24, 2010 at 9:39 PM

Interesting observation. Some time could be just a delayed effect. It's like you go through a time of numbness. Tears also have the power to take the pain away. Good write, David and thanks for your comments on my latest.