Tears

Eyes so dry that Want to cry and Cannot; trigger Those tears by Any means! Why don’t they Flow? Teas belong Where hope Is gone!

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/29/2010 1:55:00 PM

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2010 11:16:00 AM

Interesting view David.. I tend to cry for no reason sometimes.. And then I feel better, crazy hey? hehe tc Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/25/2010 8:57:00 AM

Even though I often shed tears, I HAVE to cling to hope. It's the only way to get through difficult times, David. Very compelling poem. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2010 5:44:00 AM

The flow of the tears do makes us light

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/24/2010 10:33:00 PM

great write. this is interesting about hope.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/24/2010 9:39:00 PM

Interesting observation. Some time could be just a delayed effect. It's like you go through a time of numbness. Tears also have the power to take the pain away. Good write, David and thanks for your comments on my latest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2010 8:34:00 PM

Very nice way to express this idea, David! bravo. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2010 8:18:00 PM

Short but wow! really interesting tears belong where hope is gone..makes a lot of sense,..Sidney leeAnn