Jamie Poole Poet I do not know?

Tears

Tears fall like rain
I am full of pain
I don't know what to do
My heart is broken in two
The pain is almost unbearable
I never dreamed my heart could be so destroyable
I love you more than it all
And that is why these tears fall
You've always been there for me
I thought it was meant to be
But I guess that I was wrong
My feelings have always been too strong

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2010 at 3:44 AM I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Jamie. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol

The Melody Sings March 3, 2010 at 10:37 AM WOW!!! Jamie this one is deep. Very sad you really make the reader FEEL your pain in this. Btw love the line that says tears fall like rain. Very Nice! Lovely1

Jay Loveless March 3, 2010 at 10:36 AM this is full of alot of emotion, and i think it could easily be turned into a song. add a few more verses/stazas and edit up for a chorus, and add some lines without rhymes; and itll be good. nice work though, either way. xo Rain

Adrian Torbenson March 3, 2010 at 10:33 AM very strong poem It made my heart sink trying to feel what you had to go through dont give up life gets better... good writtin keep it up

Emily Rakis March 3, 2010 at 10:09 AM Awwww, Im sorry, It will get better, Dont worrie, My theory on guys is they pms just like girls do but they dont bleed they just get moody. Just think of him as being moody, He'll tke you back, Great poem, Best way to release the emotions.<3Emily

Sara Kendrick March 3, 2010 at 9:52 AM Hope that it is just a write on a topic and not life...If life I hope that things will soon improve. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara