Tears

Tears fall like rain I am full of pain I don't know what to do My heart is broken in two The pain is almost unbearable I never dreamed my heart could be so destroyable I love you more than it all And that is why these tears fall You've always been there for me I thought it was meant to be But I guess that I was wrong My feelings have always been too strong

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2010 3:44:00 AM

I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Jamie. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol

The Melody Sings

Date: 3/3/2010 10:37:00 AM

WOW!!! Jamie this one is deep. Very sad you really make the reader FEEL your pain in this. Btw love the line that says tears fall like rain. Very Nice! Lovely1

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/3/2010 10:36:00 AM

this is full of alot of emotion, and i think it could easily be turned into a song. add a few more verses/stazas and edit up for a chorus, and add some lines without rhymes; and itll be good. nice work though, either way. xo Rain

Adrian Torbenson

Date: 3/3/2010 10:33:00 AM

very strong poem It made my heart sink trying to feel what you had to go through dont give up life gets better... good writtin keep it up

Emily Rakis

Date: 3/3/2010 10:09:00 AM

Awwww, Im sorry, It will get better, Dont worrie, My theory on guys is they pms just like girls do but they dont bleed they just get moody. Just think of him as being moody, He'll tke you back, Great poem, Best way to release the emotions.<3Emily

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2010 9:52:00 AM

Hope that it is just a write on a topic and not life...If life I hope that things will soon improve. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara