Tears

Dripping like the rain,
Off the side of a windowpane.

Falling like a star,
Shooting off so far.

Flowing like the river,
Carrying it deeper and deeper.

Slidding off my face,
As i picture you with her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 4:47 PM
Almost a couplet. Sad topic you have chosen here. Keep writing. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 2:49 PM
Very emotional write. Many have shared your feelings and many more will share them. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Oh my Joanie what a sad write. But....it is an excellent write. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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