Tears

Rain drops down the glass window ~ haunts my heart with tears ~ miss my beloved
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 12:58 AM
Loss and longing are very powerfully expressed. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 10:35 PM
Too Beautiful! Warmest congratulations on your win, Jay
Dutta Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Lovely monoku Whelmed
Volumes Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 11:02 PM
That is very sweet Jay. You said so much in so few words.
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 11:45 AM
beautiful in its sadness Jay, a very well penned monoku:-) hugs jan
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