Robert James Liguori Poet Couplet

Tears

My tears fall down to my shoes
I'm completely wrapped in the blues

I miss my love for she has left
Does my sorrow begin at the clef

I carry the notes around with me
They are there for only I to see

'cause my heart aches from pain inside
every day I just want to cry

Maybe one day I'll meet another
But for now my troubles smother


Monday, May 15, 2023
Couplet Poetry Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Subimal Sinha-Roy May 19, 2023 at 4:52 AM Congratulations on your win, Robert with this beautiful blues lyric.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2023 at 10:44 AM - Congratulations on your blue sensitive poem, Robert ... lovely written -

Alexis Y. May 16, 2023 at 9:45 PM Hi Robert, You expressed how one feels after losing their "true love" very well. Congratulations on your 1st-place win. Have a wonderful evening-Alexis

Christuraj Alex May 16, 2023 at 7:30 PM "'cause my heart aches from pain inside every day I just want to cry" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet May 16, 2023 at 11:43 AM Robert, your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win.