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Tears

My tears fall down to my shoes I'm completely wrapped in the blues I miss my love for she has left Does my sorrow begin at the clef I carry the notes around with me They are there for only I to see 'cause my heart aches from pain inside every day I just want to cry Maybe one day I'll meet another But for now my troubles smother Monday, May 15, 2023 Couplet Poetry Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/19/2023 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Robert with this beautiful blues lyric.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2023 10:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your blue sensitive poem, Robert ... lovely written -

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2023 9:45:00 PM

Hi Robert, You expressed how one feels after losing their "true love" very well. Congratulations on your 1st-place win. Have a wonderful evening-Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/16/2023 7:30:00 PM

"'cause my heart aches from pain inside every day I just want to cry" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/16/2023 11:43:00 AM

Robert, your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win.