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Tearful Dewdrop Falls

tearful dewdrop falls slipping silently from death... nature replenished Very Strict Haiku Contest For: Charles Honorable Mention word -dewdrop- early spring

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 4:28:00 AM

CAROL:) , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:34:00 AM

Thank you to everyone who commented on this piece. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/11/2011 12:12:00 PM

very meaningful haiku you have here, Carol! I really liked this one! Way to go for this :D

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations Carol on your win in Charle's contest.Enjoyed.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/11/2011 10:21:00 AM

Carol, congrats on your HM with this wonderful Haiku, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:15:00 AM

CAROL~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 8:44:00 PM

Congrats Carol on HM in Very Strict Haiku.. with these fascinating lines my friend... luv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:30:00 PM

I love the symbolic meaning of yours, Carol. Congrats.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/10/2011 5:37:00 PM

Well done Carol. Gentle and beautiful...Margaret

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 11/6/2011 7:59:00 PM

Just lovely Carol!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/3/2011 8:11:00 AM

Oh! God, how reality it is. Really purified sense can do it with few words only. Thanks, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2011 9:13:00 PM

A profound one, Carol!! Lovely kijo word.

Ray Dillard

Date: 11/2/2011 7:46:00 PM

Beautifully written! So meaningful and soulful! RAY

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2011 7:01:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in Charles' contest..Thanks for the visit to my blog..The virus was not fun combined with the pear and prunes..Sara

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/2/2011 6:22:00 PM

* “I Had to View This Wonderful Verse Quite Slowly * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * In The End It Seemed That I Found A Beautiful Reflection Amid The Precious Dew Drop * Exactly As I Find * A Beauty Inside of You * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Don Johnson

Date: 11/2/2011 5:44:00 PM

Ah well there is always change, the glow of life bereft, me ole dog don't got the mange, cute verse ....an johnsons left:)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/2/2011 5:32:00 PM

This is a wonderful Haiku. Very beautiful indeed. Always, Laura

Jack Horne

Date: 11/2/2011 2:40:00 PM

sad but beautiful haiku, Carol. Many congrats on your wins too : )