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Tearful Dewdrop Falls

tearful dewdrop falls
slipping silently from death...
nature replenished



Very Strict Haiku Contest
For: Charles
Honorable Mention



word -dewdrop- early spring

naturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

January 31, 2015 at 4:28 AM

CAROL:) , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 16, 2011 at 11:34 AM

Thank you to everyone who commented on this piece. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 11, 2011 at 12:12 PM

very meaningful haiku you have here, Carol! I really liked this one! Way to go for this :D

Kash Poet

November 11, 2011 at 11:20 AM

Congratulations Carol on your win in Charle's contest.Enjoyed.

Caryl Muzzey

November 11, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Carol, congrats on your HM with this wonderful Haiku, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

November 11, 2011 at 1:15 AM

CAROL~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2011 at 8:44 PM

Congrats Carol on HM in Very Strict Haiku.. with these fascinating lines my friend... luv...

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2011 at 8:30 PM

I love the symbolic meaning of yours, Carol. Congrats.

Margaret Foster

November 10, 2011 at 5:37 PM

Well done Carol. Gentle and beautiful...Margaret

Kimberly Larocca

November 6, 2011 at 7:59 PM

Just lovely Carol!

Bl Devnath

November 3, 2011 at 8:11 AM

Oh! God, how reality it is. Really purified sense can do it with few words only. Thanks, bl

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2011 at 9:13 PM

A profound one, Carol!! Lovely kijo word.

Ray Dillard

November 2, 2011 at 7:46 PM

Beautifully written! So meaningful and soulful! RAY

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2011 at 7:01 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in Charles' contest..Thanks for the visit to my blog..The virus was not fun combined with the pear and prunes..Sara

Sarah Seraphin

November 2, 2011 at 6:22 PM

* “I Had to View This Wonderful Verse Quite Slowly * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * In The End It Seemed That I Found A Beautiful Reflection Amid The Precious Dew Drop * Exactly As I Find * A Beauty Inside of You * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *